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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Condoms anyone? seems to me he never uses them, now he's had multiple partners he doesn't know, I'm not saying it's only up to him to think about that, but the women too.

LoneStarRiderLoneStarRideralmost 13 years ago
Well, gee.....

And the story was going so well. And then we go with the threesome (er, the foursome)??? Why? The story was plausible and delightful, before that intrusion. (imho)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
What The ???

Where did this come from? This makes them a better couple?

Doing 2 other women. What the Heck. Time to bring in two other guys

into their new love life with them the way this story line is going.

Good story done gone bad. So Sad!!!!

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