All Comments on 'What Is It'

by sammy 2006

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
bloody marvelous

weldone sammy, that told it just how it should be told and every word was so right. i can almost guarentee the girl on the receiving end of that kiss if it was for real would have been blown away by it. keep up the good work. L xx

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Now that was proper kissing!

It's great to read a story about good, proper, thorough kissing, and nothing but. I'm a huge fan of kissing - the descriptions were very detailed - I could feel myself in that woman's shoes all the way through the story.

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