All Comments on 'What Just Happened?'

I would be nice to know what the mother meant.

This story needs people talking to each other a lot more. Talking makes us "see" much better what someone else is like, what they sound like, how they think. It makes them real.

A good story, but took a wrong turn. A lot of guys even in their 40's are in similar circumstance. When they engage in unacceptable behavior, it is still up to mother to instill discipline including spanking .

Great job - I enjoyed it. I about lost it when you said that "what I thought was panties was actually a thong"....ie she planned it the whole time :)

Very well written, I hope we see more from you like this.

Great story - big fan of wrestling as foreplay. I like your other stories as well (though I pretend it's a step-mom in the stories), so I'm glad to see you're back posting them. Hope you keep this story going, kidrock!

Very hot

Your Family Battle stories were amazing, I'm so grateful to see more of your work.

This is one intense story

Excellent.

Very, very erotic.

Softcore-pornographic.

Borderline romantic & poetic.

Very well written.

Intelligently conceived story line.

The author skillfully brings mom & son to perfect-storm circumstances where they accidentally discover their respective "other sides".

Well, I have to say that was completely different from what I had expected. Looking forward to another chapter.

Great story a part 2 would be epic.

You left off ,she got out of the shower, and he was getting in. Now the writing on the mirror said it's not over. But for us it looks like it is over,good story but we need an end.... good read thanks

I rated this story a 4 because I could not psychologically determine what was going on chemically, emotionally nor physically between mother and son. I understand the emotional swings happening to the son. I do not understand his lack of concern for his two sons. Likewise, it is his mother;s house and she has the right to set the rules. I also understand her resentment that the son goes out but she is expected to watch the children. I do not know the relationship between mother and son. I do not know where the husband is. This story lacks direction. I like character development. I like logical plot development. The author needs to finish this story. As a side note,I do not like wrestling.