All Comments on 'What Just Happened? Ch. 02'

Definitely better than the last chapter. Much easier to follow. Let's see how this story continues.

I want it to flow better and take the reader on a journey

Okay, I'm tenting in my panties and about to cum!

Sooo, great work!

Of course, I pee sitting like a girl, but being told to by step-sister would be so humiliating! She obviously enjoys peeing in front of you, too!! Er...

All exciting. The body wash IS an excitement the first time you try it, too, huh?

Mm.

what another wounderfull part wish i had a sister like her

Just read a badly written story!

Literotica should have a policy to block this type of submission or at the very least make it a mandatory referral to editor for re-write!

What a damn shame!

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You can't write!!

Good 2nd chapter but I hope David is at least bi-sexual. I'm a CD and I suspect all (or almost all) CDs are at least bi-sexual if not gay. I actually prefer sex with men more than with women but I still consider myself to be bi. I wish I had a hot sexy sister (or step-sister) to help me and to also entice me in her sexy lingerie. The incest/taboo angle of your story really turns me on. Please explore that further as well as having David at least explore sex with a man.

I wish I had a step-sister like Beth. I would love to have someone to help me be the sissy CD that I really am.

Loved this chapter. Wish I had a stepsister like Beth. Can't wait to read the next chapters.

I truly wish I had a sister such as her, how I would have loved to be guided in the intimacy of becoming female.

Showing me how to slip on a pair of panties and my bra, along with garter belt stockings high heels and all the other beautiful Intimates within female lingerie. After which would be the putting out of the skirt & blouse or the little black dress. And finally my wig and the makeup. Fish also how to walk like a lady.