All Comments on 'What Michael Knows Ch. 01'

While the identity of her affair was apparent, Stephanie's anxiety of the situation was written very well. Excellent first chapter. Looking forward to its continuation.

This story is going to be great. Amazing start.

U need to make this stretch longer and lots of chapter and lot of slow build up

Very erotic in a clandestine way.

Very well done. Can’t wait for next chapter. Hopefully will reveal how he found out

Really looking forward to how this develops!

I look forward to see how she gets out of this one

I love feedback - both good and bad - so thank you for the remarks so far. Not much to respond to, but here are some comments.

Re: "Stretch this out longer" Anonymous user

Like I said in my author's note, I am working on Chapter 8 currently and plan to upload a chapter of this story once every week (usually around Sunday/Monday to upload in a couple of days). My hope is that by the end of February, I'll have the complete story written. That hopefully will tell you how much I am stretching this out.

Re: "Can't Wait" Anonymous user

I think you'll be pretty happy with Chapters 2 and 5.

Again, thanks for reading and rating. Special thanks for feedback. This was the toughest story I've tried to write and hopefully, I'll address most of your questions moving forward.

I enjoyed it. Wondering if you're going to have the dad find out and confront them

Don't bring the sister in this sexually.. maybe have her catch her in the act with one of the boys.. or make it to where Michael tells mom she has to quit seeing Jacob..