All Comments on 'What Might Have Been'

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Well written with interesting perspectives from the two main characters. As others have said, I didn't care for the ending. Wished it had been the fairy tale ending but sometimes reality interrupts our wishes.

A good story and well worth the read.

Woodmanone

A good story with an awful ending. I like happy endings, and this one wasn't. Thanks for writing though.

Well written, but the ending, painful, and hard. Given the characters, not all that surprising actually. Thanks for your hard work, and for sharing.

NorthPacific

We all enjoy fairy tale endings, or at least happy endings, including me. Sadly, the brutality of real life often gets in the way and you're left with what happened here.

Domestic violence/shootings have become all too commonplace in our society. We hear and read about it all the time - an angry, disgruntled spouse or significant other shows up at the workplace with a gun. So I wrote this with that harsh reality in mind.

A sad but all too real tale, well told. Thanks!

This is not the kind of story that I like, but I liked it anyway. Thank you for sharing it.