All Comments on 'What My Brother Left Me Ch. 01'

I like this story. The following chapters should be fun!

story, made me delightfully happy

DAMSEL Approved

What a fantastic start to a series. The neighbours certainly are very friendly. Looking forward to reading your next chapters with realish.

Step siblings come about when two adults who have children FROM OTHER RELATIONSHIPS get married. Half Siblings come from a father having children from two different women or a mother having children from two different fathers... My God...

So In This Story Charlie and John are HALF BROTHERS!!! NOT STEP BROTHERS...

Basic story is starting out well but you need an editor & proofreader badly. Did you or anyone even read through it after you wrote it before submitting it? Contains many typos & grammatical errors that are VERY distracting

Funny, engrossing,and I can't wait to find out more about brother and his ladies! Oh, yes... I find it very erotic. thank you!

It is rare that the story is as good, or as appreciated as the sex. I am going to read the second part, not for the sex, but to see what happens in the story.

Looking forward to some more conquests and solution of the zigsaw puzzle

I wonder if he was doing any realty work. This could be an interesting and complex story.

or is it Mrs.?

It would be nice to know what the heck is going on.

but, even so, it is fun so far.

I love your writing. It's fast and fresh.

Thank you.

Kind regards,

Petet

Fuck me that’s funny.

So hot! Looking forward to part II

Writing in present tense ruins most stories.... like this one.

Unfinished

Interesting start.