All Comments on 'What Price Power? Ch. 12'

The story is picking up the pace and getting focused. Love the direction this is going and the two potential "suiters" (as if Mina has a choice). I so hate what Mina's master is doing to Rosie and plans to do to with the guest house. You've done an excellent job of making him beastly and sadistic but with hints of caring for something other than himself. Based on some of the things said in the last few chapters, as awful as he's been so far, he is actually far worse. So, will he be slightly rehabilitated and polished up for Mina (with his monsterousness tamed and focused on the bad guys--where he's still a bit of a monster, but he's her monster) or is she destined for the prince?

I'm so happy you posted this new chapter. It's a great story!