All Comments on 'What She Wanted'

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mussorgskymussorgskyover 17 years ago
Beware, Alfred Hitchcock, your successor is here

Bravo, You write true erotica, not porn. Very well written with a surprise ending just as one is prepared for the usual stock coclusion.The characters are real and believable. Write on!

Scotsman69Scotsman69almost 15 years ago
wonderful

Exquisite writing, incredible sensuality, a delicious twist in the tale. Couldn't be better. Time to write more, please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
great read

I'm not sure which of your three submissions I enjoyed most, you really are a great writer. Your erotic scenes are just that, not crude or vulgar but truely erotic. I can't wait to read more of your work. When can we expect the next one?

chilleywilleychilleywilleyalmost 11 years ago
Wow

Sad you are not writing. Superb story

Chilley

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
A little editing, maybe?

He felt a weight lifted from him. Goodbye to the beautiful, but unreal Princess. A new start with a lovely real woman. He rang Sarah.

'Did you get a letter this morning?' He asked, hoping this wasn't a terrible wind-up.

'From Sarah?'

'Yes.'

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Been a long time since I published anything. I have a few in the almost completed pile and one day I'll get round to publishing a couple. Many thanks to those who have sent feedback to me , it's very much appreciated and makes the whole process worthwhile. FWIW Middle aged ...