by York
Bravo, You write true erotica, not porn. Very well written with a surprise ending just as one is prepared for the usual stock coclusion.The characters are real and believable. Write on!
Exquisite writing, incredible sensuality, a delicious twist in the tale. Couldn't be better. Time to write more, please!
I'm not sure which of your three submissions I enjoyed most, you really are a great writer. Your erotic scenes are just that, not crude or vulgar but truely erotic. I can't wait to read more of your work. When can we expect the next one?
He felt a weight lifted from him. Goodbye to the beautiful, but unreal Princess. A new start with a lovely real woman. He rang Sarah.
'Did you get a letter this morning?' He asked, hoping this wasn't a terrible wind-up.
'From Sarah?'
'Yes.'