by psyche_b_mused
I love Victor and Kelly! They are both so flawed, I love their relationship. I know she has do go through this emotional healing and all,but I hope she continues to rely on Victor and not let the xmen rip her from her mate.
I love this story.
I love the relationship between Victor and Kelly and hope that he will eventually get her brother back as well.
Cannot wait for the next chapter.
the chapters keep getting better and better! Another breakthrough! It's interesting to look at the situation from Victor's view--I know he's a murderous bastard and all, but everyone at the school does seem a little too sanctimonious. Don't get me wrong, I understand Victor is not known for being a kind, caring person, even his brother accepts that--but everyone should be given the benefit of doubt, especially since they've all seen how he treats Kelly. The man is in love with her and would cut off his arms before he does her any harm and the fact that they saved her life puts them a little lower on the list.
Spectacular chapter, my new favorite. Please write more.
It's awesome and great ... but your chapter #s are a little off! You went from 22 to 24 :P
I love the way you've built Victor - sure he's harsh and hard on the outside, but inside (for her) he's soft and sweet ... makes me want to saw 'aaaah'.
bravo!
I'm a little pissed off at the X-Men but at the same time, glad they are trying to make a stand with Kelley's fragile mind. You have done a FREAKIN' FANTASTIC job at keeping the characters real, and their reactions on point.
Love, love, love.
Next week doesn't come quickly enough!
Your writing is brilliant as ever. I simply love it. And thank you for having an internal chapter count in the story, becuase this helps when the posting is getting a bit confusing. Hope you have more stories to share!
You out do yourself with every new chapter! Patiently waiting for next weeks chapter..
Oh what an interesting web you have created, capturing us all in its snare! I love this chapter, I love this story and gosh darn it - I love the fact that I don't know what is going to happen around the corner. So far, none of my predictions and scheming has been correct *sigh*
Till next week - thank you so much for sharing.
Again and again you have out done your self. Lady, you have made me laugh and brought tears to my eyes. Thank you!!!!
Can't wait for next week though.
You are a fucking rockstar.
Long live hot mutant sex with great plot!
Love, your biggest fan.
Have you submitted any work as published??? You are a most wonderful artist!!!! Thank you for submitting your wonderfully drawn characters, they have come so alive through your stories.... :) I have been very sick and look so forward to reading about Victor and Kelly.... I can tell you have true talent!!!! Thank you again!!! :)
u blow me away each and every week as the story progresses.
*falls to knees and begs for an update* XD
k.
i feel like a thirsty man in sahara while waiting for the next update...
XD
I think your attempts to straighten out the story led to reprinting last week's segment. Better luck next time.
Yikes Psyche.... think we read this chapter and although a good one I was looking forward to the next :)
I was so disappointed that this is the same chapter as last week...Don't get me wrong I loved the chapter. But, I am dying for a new one. PLEASE, PLEASE RE-POST CH.24. YOUR LOVING READERS AWAIT.
the way you describe him and his beahvior towards her in the last part and the interraction between victor and kelly starting where he admits she is his mate is just perfection. he is the victor creed everyone fears still, yet there he is fearing her rejection. so bloody amazing and unexpected.
i come back regularly waiting to read new update but find myself re-reading older chapters re-discovering them as characters as well as enjoy the story.
k.
I love your story and I think I've been through all of them through this chapter in the span of 2 days. I hate hating the professor though :(
You are doing a masterful job at describing the growing love and tenderness between Victor and frail