All Comments on 'What the World doesn't Know Ch. 02'

I hope she gets away from this monster!

This story is making me so deliciously terrified. I can't pick up on the tone and can't make up what I want. Do I love Neil or do I hate him? I love Joe though. More dialogue please! :) This looks like a great story.

I can't grasp the tone here either. You definately want us to feel unnerved. What is the consent level here? Is this all a level of play, or is he actually a sick fuck? My hackles are up, but I'm still staring at it.

Thanks everyone for your comments.

I should probably have put a disclaimer in the beginning itself. This is dark and twisted. And NOT AT ALL realistic. In real life, you should run away from anything even remotely resembling this!

So, please be prepared for that :)