All Comments on 'What Truth May Bring'

Story just not my thing, wife taking him down a road he doesn't want to go, yet there he goes anyway. Divorce will happen.

i really liked your story and was glad you went with normal everyday women to fill it with. sort of added a level of reality to it. pretty darn good story.

Could have used a little more time in the editor shop but otherwise good. Let's see some more like this.

loved the story!

As someone else said, it was good that the women in the story were meant to be normal instead of the hottest women in the world or something else completely unrealistic. However, I thought there was too much emphasis on that. Constantly mentioning that they were "not what I would normally go for", or "tolerable" didn't make it seem like the compliment that I think it was meant to be. It was done to the point that it seemed insulting. Making the point was good, but then it was overdone. Other than that I thought the story was great. Good portrayal of most of the characters. A few typos here and there, but not so many that it pulled me out of the story.

Too long. Got to be boring.