by KemMyst
There's nothing wrong with your writing, you should be getting higher ratings than you have been. It is a difficult subject to write about, but if people are object to it they should just stop reading rather than rating it low.
Will you be continuing the Lyssa & Emmett series ? Love them!
Would any leader, anywhere, let an attempted rapist go? It doesn't make much sense that Devon let Spencer get away. Also, crazy as it may sound, I'd like to hear more about Amanda, why is she seemingly OK with being abducted and impregnated?
Reread the story and comprehend what you have read. You will then have the answer to your confusion.
I love the enigma that is Anne. So man, Devon is nice-ish. Alpha males take no orders that do not comply with internal moral code. The wolf in the them will not allow it. Council be damned, Devon is a little sweeter than the other Alpha's....got a little sugar in his tank?
Hey just love the story so far but the wait between chapters is excruciating. Worse than waiting for birthday. Should get higher rating though keep the intrigue going.