All Comments on 'What Will She Do For An A+?'

til 4 pm tomorrow for the sequel to this delightful A+++ story!!!

really loved it, Ben

Bring on 4pm tomorrow! loved it!!!

Very Very Hot.

Excellent Writing.

Can't wait for more.

nice name good story. a good starting place. short so you easily complete, good sex (not a big part of my style) i liked it and gave you the 5. good luck with the stories yet to cum.

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Simple, but hot. My ex-boyfriend and I both appreciated it. (We write under "eroticorgasm" on literotica). Welcome to the club. He came on the phone while I read him your story ... and I came before I called him. ;)

You are a wonderful writer.

This is just fantastic. Just the way I like it.

If you're going to use so much dialogue in your stories - which I always think is a good thing, if handled well - you'll need to work on making the dialogue more believable, more subtle, rather than suddenly bursting into the "Strip, you slut!" style. After all, he's not to know she won't simply report him for sexual harrassment and lose him his tenure. Better to work up into it, maybe even coax her into raising the "deal" herself. Good effort for your debut, though.

this story got me soo horney that i had to pleasure myslef twice

Nice first story, NotQuiteVirginal, but if you want an A I think you need to come to my office for some personal instruction....

And will she get any more if she allows his sperm to begin fertilizing her eggs?

Keep up the good work honey and you'll be alright! Just let your imagination talk to you as you write! Think about whether or not you could or would be able to do the things you describe, (don't get crazy and talk impossible acrobatics) keep it real!! You did very well!!!

Please continue this... You've got an amazing start. I'd love to see what happens and how far she'll go for an A.

As a teacher I can only say.....works for me....