All Comments on 'What You Need'

BUT...

You need an editor/proofreader -- you wrote SITES meaning SIGHTS, etc.

And I'd have liked more tits/nipples involvement.

Keep writing!

Regardless of the comment about spelling and grammar, I enjoyed reading this story. Reading the words for what they actually meant not what the misspelt word meant.

You had me constantly reading wanting to know what was going to happen, but I was also wanting to enjoy what was happening.

Great story premise! Would be interesting to know what goes on in the other rooms...

Thanks for the kind words and for pointing out my blaring spelling mistake. I had read the story multiple times, yet that slipped through. It appears that I'll need to give it another pass and possibly have someone, other than myself, proofread it as well.

That took my breath away!