All Comments on 'What You Wish For'

Please use an editor. The story idea was good and more than warm. An idea for you, perhaps without drugs to use as an excuse her fantasy could be the beginning of a lifestyle. IMHO the drugs cheapen the story.

Why would she stay with a man who abandoned her?

Ignore that person, i thought it was utter genius. this is going to be a great series and it touches on the things that turn me on the most, rape play and control with a master. excellent, i enjoyed it very much if you know what i mean ;)

This was an awesome premise & I totally agree that their chemistry needs to be further explored!!! I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART.

Let's see where it leads!