by ZenZerker
Just a hot story keep on trucking love it tenbears43
This is the kind of Book That I Love reading .. Good Story Line ...
Awesome story line, loved it and gave 5 stars. Only bad thing is that there is only one more chapter after this, I feel this should be like a 10 - 20 part series, as this is not just a quick wank story but it actually has the start of what could be an amazing storyline.
Okay, 3 chapters in one bed. This was really good in the beginning but it got really old after #2. Just a lot of screwing in bed with no real plot. Where is the mother? Did she just leave in the morning without checking up on them? Where is Didi's friend from chapter 1. This story needs less bed time and more story time. Very disappointing. Sorry, but NO way this gets 5 stars.
Way too much anal, way too much 'silly girl', way too much 'Teddy Bear'. Too much noise during sex. Does 'Momma' the doctor work 24-7? Where was she? Surely she would have heard.