by PhilFluter
Other than a few, very minor, grammatical errors, this was a great first chapter! Keep it up! I like that it's not just about the sex and that there is a real story here! I can't wait for more!
I expect sex, after all this is Literotica, but it has a great storyline as well.
I love the whole storyline and that there is nothing unreasonable or far fetched about it!
I see it's been quite a while since you wrote this, but I'm hoping that you come back and complete this love story!