All Comments on 'What's a Little Sex Among Friends?'

Do you really not know the difference between "where" and "were"?

Steak dinner with white wine. Philistine!

Oh! The sex? Unbelievable! (In the bad sense!)

for someone with an 8th grade education. It's never too late to go back to school, you know. Four years of high school English will work wonders.

Did you know that in some countries using "me and him" as the subject of a sentence is a criminal offense? You're lucky you live in America where people like that can be president.

Literotica shoud ban this author for life!

Until you finish high school. I can't read something that poorly written.

Is it for best parody of a really, really bad Literotica submission? There have been so many lately, it can't be coincidence. This one's definitely a candidate for the grand prize.

i think the author has some issues to work out. next time put this pile of crap in the gay male section homo boy.

this is really a sick one

Needs a little sowing of wild oats into fertile cunts.

Needs a little sowing of wild oats into fertile cunts.

You need a lot of work on basic english usage plus you put this story in the wrong category it could have gone in gay male or perhaps read this if you want to read the dumbest story you've ever read! Don't submit anymore stories till you learn english.

Couldn't read it past the 5th or 6th paragraph (There were paragraphs?)

The subjects had my interest, and the plot was good.

but it was written in what I call "email format"

where the grammer and parahraph structure don't really sync. I didn't judge you too harshly in this area, I mainly looked at content.

I expect more from your next submission..

For a first time writer.. not too bad

You have potential!

I didn't know that grade three students could get on this site. Hey Jethro, go back to school and learn some engilsh.

before it was obvious that the writer was functionally illiterate. That means the writer can't. I then looked at the writer's nom and realized that the 5000 is the year the writer intends to graduate for middle school.

It's a sex story you ass clowns so give the guy a break.

This is a group having sex. That sounds like group sex to me. The girls were also having relations. Shouldn't it then go in lesbian sex?