by pj
Hi im Lucy! Wow that was an awesome story.. one of the things I liked most about this story is the fact that names werent used often so it was easy for the reader to imagine themselves and a person of their choice in the story. I loved how well you described things, yet still kept it tastfull, most stories I read are overly crude...
wow keep up the good work
Lucy
The title of this comment was enough said. As I was reading it, my girlfriend kind of acted out the stuff. WHEW!