by Avide
it is going sooooo good, this story is well written and kind of mysterious, no definitely mysterious! but i absolutely love it! keep going and i will be very much waiting like the good fan that i am! ;)
And the plot thickens.Good story,I like it. More please.
Seems like the chapter is never enough. (I mean that as a compliment.) Keep them coming!
I hope Rav can get over her fear and find her strength among her new friends.
i love this story. there are only few things i will read more then once and this is one of them. keep it coming!
You know you are reading a good story when you come to the last chapter and your go: "Awwwww." :( because there isn't any more to read. Looking forward to the next chapter.
wow! ive been waiting for more and i didnt no when but i saw ur chapter will be up september 7th. thats a day before my birthday. im SO excited. happy birthday to me i guess! wooo! thankyou! i really like this story. hahah.
xoxox -kia.
Please sort your timeline out .she's been with them 13 days and yet she was supposed to be unconscious for over that when she woke .......she had a broken arm and yet she's climbing trees ?? She's put on weight in 13 days ....Love the storyline to pieces and your writing in general is excellent so seems a shame to ruin ot for a few changed figures ....maybe make it 28 days she'd been with them in this chapter ??
I have read a few story's sinceci found your site, and none have made me laugh like yours has. You remind me of Jaz in the beginning keep up the good work. You will only get better with practice