All Comments on 'When All Else Fails Ch. 01'

Just need 1 or 2 edits but you'll get the hang of it. I can't wait for Chapter 2!

more please.. I would do the experiment living as a girl full time

Great start, please continue ... the story line holds promise, now all you have to do it continue and keep it interesting, laced with touches of sex, sex, sex ... and maybe a little danger or humiliation ... and if he does this experiment correctly, his is absolutely going to become addicted to "All Things Feminine"

You won't know, what will happen, if you don't try. Would like to see chapter 2.

This would be good if he went through with it and found himself more attuned to being a working-class, down to earth woman, unlike his male persona and grew to like it more as time passed, so he wound up being a waitress, a secretary or some other lower-level position and was way happier that way,.

You've done pretty well without one, to be quite honest, but it's always good to have a fresh pair of eyes. I hope you manage to hook a good one!

As to your story, I thought it was very good, especially as a first submission. Keep writing, welcome to Literotica, thanks for your story and please have four stars!

Thank you for a wonderful start chronicling Joshua investigating crossdressing at college. Please continue, you have me hooked for sure. TG Tiffany