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All Comments on 'When Barry Met Sally'

by Ann Douglas

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lonelyhdlonelyhdover 6 years ago

Probably one of the best stories of yours I have read. Some will say you are predictable, and maybe you are a little, but I don't think that detracts from most of your writing.

auwingerauwingerover 6 years ago
Another 5* story, Ann.

Great story with a surprising ending!! Please keep up the good work!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Barry needs to move on from that selfish, manipulative bitch.

danoctoberdanoctoberover 4 years ago
Very nice indeed.

Sally wasn't a likable character, therefore the story's end was proper. However, Bernie was interesting enough for another chapter. *****

maddictmaddictover 3 years ago

Something about a book and it's cover comes to mind.

You have a lot of stories, I look forward to enjoying them

JBEdwardsJBEdwardsover 3 years ago

A thoroughly enjoyable ending. Sally is really a piece of work, and I'm surprised Barry lasted as long as he did. This is the first of your stories that I've read, but I enjoy the way it's written, the characterizations, everything. 5*, obviously. JB Edwards

Mike9947Mike9947about 3 years ago

Lovely

Would love to read more about B & B

OlFrog14xOlFrog14xabout 3 years ago
Too obvious but ...

the title really should have been "When Barry Dumped Sally".

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userAnn Douglas@Ann Douglas
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I'm an average wife and mother, well, maybe not so average, who likes to write Erotica. I'm not a professional writer. In fact, until I tried writing my first story in the early 90s, I hadn't written anything longer than a letter since high school 20 years before. I like ...