All Comments on 'When Darkness Falls Ch. 03'

Just read all three chapters. Fabulous. Please continue the story.

This is so cute! I'm loving it, so please don't abandon it!

One of these guys, Matt probably, has to be hairy. Bring it on!

Gimme more. A whole lot more. Like all of the more. Please. I love this and your other series. Don't you dare stop writing

What? No sex scene? Am I on literotica?

Jk

I thought it was great and very refreshing. Very heartfelt. I kinda like how they are so short. Like all the little important moments of their relationship. I really want to see there relationship all the way to the end, I wanna see love, I want to see fighting, I want to see it all. Grammar and writing could use a little help but it's a great story and I really want to read how these two fell in some old time-y love and how it matured. Also I want some really hot sex.

Nice build up on this story. I look forward to see where it goes from here.

I cannot wait for the next part of the story.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️👍

Billy

Buffalo, NY

This may be the most captivating story on Literotica that I've ever read ~

This is a wonderful story. I am hooked and need more. Please.

Please please please finish this story

Please continue

Not best. No, dicks cumming deep up twink ass holes!!