All Comments on 'When Irish Eyes Are Smiling'

hot, sexy and seductive..the story draws you in and holds you prisoner..Loved it, both of you.

Can't wait to read more.

Absolutely perfect... More please ;)

A nice erotic read you two!

Your story has been mentioned on the New Story Review thread found on Lit.'s bulletin board under the Author's Hangout forum. Thanks for the read. ~ Red

What a delicious appetizer ... I can hardly wait to see what's coming next. I love the interaction between Joel and Devlin .. the awkward dance of "is he or isn't he" and the very strong sexual tension between the two of them develops wonderfully as the story progresses, culminating in the smoking hot restaurant scene. Well done, you two. Very well done.

How dare you tease us for three delicious pages! And they were delicious. I'm certainly smiling and eager to read part two!

omg, no way, not "to be continued" arghhhh, hurry, hurry, hurry....we need the next installment!

How refreshing, a well-written story! With a shocking number of authors submitting stories that would fail to receive a passing grade in a Jr. High creative writing course, you stand at the head of the class. Very erotic and well defined character development. And that comes from a straight female, go figure

What a very beatifyl story. Hot and tantalising - but also sweet and heart touching at the same time.

I am very happy the second part is out so I am not left hanging here though!

your writing is very impressive and life like for a lack of a better way of wording it. wonderful story, Thanks For Sharing

PLEASe, write more. I need to hear of these tow making love

Oh it caught my intrest! I can't wait to read the rest

Truly, it is a stunning submission. I am in awe of your writing and am so thankful that there is more! Beautifully done.

i like sex but what i love is the ambience. you get that here.

what a fantastic beginning!

*fans self*

Dru

Lovely start.

This is going to be fun :D

it ended right at the good part. gosh i wish life was like this

What a great set up to the story. I love getting to hear the scene from both individual men's point of view! Can't wait to continue reading the story!!!!

This is so romantic, can't wait to read the rest :)

But it was well worth it! Can't wait to read the next halter, and the next, and...

I keep coming back to this story, and it's easy to see why it's one of the top-rated. Dev and Joel are so well-matched and make a sexy couple.

o m g this is so hot and sexy

love the pov of dev and joel the build up is fantastic i like how they both sort of dont know what the other is thinking its very well written

I enjoyed reading this. It was a great and easy read. However, where is the rest of it?

Love the first installment of this. They are sweet and sexy together.

It's as smooth as Irish coffee and goes down just as well

As an Irishman myself, I'm really looking where this story us going. Everything thus far has been really hot, but there is nothing that gets me as riled up as the mistreatment and abuse of Guinness. Guinness is a very particular beer, and must be drunk in a very particular way. Guinness is best poured from a tap, and I'm not even sure if you can get a bottle of Guinness. You can get cans, but those are only really used for culinary purposes. Anyone who drinks Guinness, as Devlin clearly does, would be insulted to be handed a bottle or can of the stuff when they are sitting at a bar.

Fantastic beginning to end! To the anonymous Irish man in the comments just below: Guinness comes in bottles in the US.