All Comments on 'When It Rains'

Please, chapter 2, This is the best I have read in a long time. The old ladies have no idea what they have missed. I only can wish I had a neighbor like this. We are waiting. Please do not disappoint us...

What an exciting story you have there! I really like the way you drew the foreplay out for so long.

Loved it! Very good indeed!

Thank you very much, I love drawn-out foreplay.

Excellent. I love his and her personalities, they really mix well. This story has unlimited potential in so many different directions. As an exotic dancer, she can tease, entice, introduce, share, overwhelm, and turn almost any situation into a festival of sublime subtlety or maximum intensity.

I love her as a brunette... I want to hear more about her skin color, her nipples, everything about her.

EROTIC poetry...intense, compelling, hot, throbbing.

It stokes craving, copious wetness, then sweet release.

That's it!