All Comments on 'When It Rains, It Pours'

It is easy to give compliments when the story is so worthy of them! I love the ending just as much now as I did when I first read it. The misdirection, how she starts the flashback angry at him, it is very well done! Your growth as a writer is wonderful to see and I love that I can call someone this talented a friend. (Yes, I'm kissing your ass. But this story deserves it...)

Soaking wet and and not a bit upset about it. Great work, Honey. The impulsive sex was very arousing. And a good story behind it. Well done.

Those price checks get me every time, too. But hey, her day sure took a turn for the better. Nice work!

I love reading stories when I can tell the author truly enjoyed writing them. This short story is poignant and down to earth. Keep writing!

calls for wet, wet, wet. awesome job honey. you know how i feel about the BEACH! *grin*.. thanks for a great story, you vixen. maybe the next one could be on how to sodomize your car...i think that would be a great tail.

*hugs*

v~

Outstanding story. Great imagery.

but I wish it were raining now. Very sweet Honey, a flash back style that worked wonderfully for the story. Definitely headed into the Rainy Day anthology.

But I do now!

Great writing!

But I do now!

Great writing!

I expected nothing less, as it was your 'taster' that inspired the challenge. Well written, sexy, tender, exciting, all wrapped up in one bundle. Like Vella, can't wait to read about the sodomised sports car!! Auntie Mat

Great story Honey... actually have been there, rain falling, deserted beach... brought back memories!!!

I really enjoyed the scenario, always been a huge fantasy of mine to make love in a thunder shower.

I can't believe I hadn't read any of your stories before. Well done.