All Comments on 'When Life Gives You Lemons!'

Please continue with more. Thanks

without hurting the kids

Loved your story, but you need to work on your grammar.

Hot story, but you never finished it. The whole reference to a Sari (which you mispelled) makes me think you are Indian, and I avoid those writers like the plague.

Five years is to long to wait for a sequel, so we will assume it's not coming. The grammar was choppy. Maybe you should have had it proofread first. This almost sounds like a true story, and if it is , we understand why there is no sequel. It was a good storyline.