All Comments on 'When Love Is Wrong'

So where do they go from here? If this is a real, lifetime commitment, does he move in with her at college or what? What about kids? What about Matt, who must know something kinkier than normal was involved the night before?

Hot story...would love another installment!!!

This really got my juices flowing. Would have liked to see Matt involved in a 'real' threeway. Keep em cumming!

The story was impressive. It was Hot as hell. Sexy beyond question. My feelings were for the story to be just between the brother and sister. I thought the side show with Matt was a complete distraction. I grew to really disliked his character. I would like you to extend the story. I don't know how far it can go? You have it going well, so push it.

This is the first comment I've ever left for a story, even though I've read them for years. This one is simply one of the very best I have ever read. Thank you, thank you, and PLEASE continue!

i absolutely loved it, truly amazing

absolutely amazing!!! god i wish i have a hot sis to fuck and cum in. you're amazing princess

keep up the good work.

SMN

Oh God this so hot......As you know baby, I can't read beyond the first page right now...Too much danger of exploding in my pants right this moment....Not good to be doing at work....

I'll have to "finish" with this later...Maybe you can read it to me tonight...and we can put you in your favorite positions.

I'm sooo lucky to have you as mine...(Eat your heart out lads!!!)

You write a fabulous story and I love the character development and the romance parts. To improve you could use a good editor to eliminate the grammar errors. It detracts from an otherwise great story.

Princess,

Great story and one of my favorite subjects. I am just starting to work my way through all of your stories and I will comment on each one.

Uncle Jim

I've listened to your audio versions of several tales, but reading your stories is so much more enjoyable! Thanks so much for telling such a great tale about my favorite subject.

to unrealistic no guy would act like that after confronting his sister about acting slutty around his friends he would have either thrown everyone out or just left him self and avoided and ignored her for life try to keepm it realistic or put it in the fantacy area

fantastic story...I like the emotional development of the characters...

Great sexual chemistry between the characters, what a hot slutty sister!

You do the hottest audio in the world and your writing is just as hot!

after she acted like a slut then let matt feel her up while watching the movie there is no way in hell he would ever want anything to do with her. total bullshit as usual for this site belongs in the nonerotic or fantasy area.

This could have been a great story if you didn't bring that Matt character into the whole thing. It ruined the loving feeling the story did have at first. What a shame, it could have been a great story line. :( toby9790.

no way in hell would he feel her up while matt was. as soon as she said not to get tangled with matts hand he would have got up and left. adding matt just made the whole story totally unrealistic and unbelievable like 90% of the asses here you are real good at ruining a story. i suggest you delete the story and rewrite it omitting the part where matt feels her up keep it just brother and sister. did you even think about what would happen if matt realised nick was feeling up his sister? all hell would break loose stop rewriting human nature and rewrite the story and do it properly.

Love your story, it is not the number of characters that counts or the lack of them it is the erotic interplay that counts... and you did it nicely. Thanks

as soon as she started to flirt with his freinds especially matt he would have left and not come home til the next day then avoid her until he could move out KEEP IT SOME WHAT BELIEVABLE.

She's a slut and a cock-tease, why did he even bother with her once she turned his friend on? He should have just have split and left his friends to dog-pile her; after all, she'd already proved she was a slut.

Don't fucking write this kind of card why would he love slut sister like you love and fuck two different world

this was a very good life like story, I wonder how real life loves are like this. I only heard of one in where I us to live there wasn't much said about it . it was excepted the last I new but that has years ago

It was obliviously lust, doubt if the word love is in her vocabulary.

Brilliant! A new favourite

If it were me in this story

oh 2 have a someone like him in my life, wow...

Asian_Princess has the hottest audios on this site, my wife and I always get off listening to them together. This story is just as good, amazingly erotic!

Nicely written loved it five stars!!!!!