by MaryAnderson
Not as enjoyable....the incest and seduction made first chapter better.
I liked the mind control aspect of the story and the sex was hot but I wished it had been another page longer and detailed the threesome at home with Mom! That would have been smoking!!
Very well done! A bit short, but I enjoyed it regardless! Thank you!
It's one thing to have a sociopath as a protagonist, but to try to justify his behavior by making the teacher seem like the villain (as if this were possible under the circumstances) is just ridiculous. Well written, but 3 stars for the attempted ethical gymnastics.
I am enjoying this story very much! Kelly Winters has a bright future on this website! 5 stars