All Comments on 'When No Woman Equals Mom Ch. 02'

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SyrustheVirusSyrustheVirusalmost 7 years ago

Not as enjoyable....the incest and seduction made first chapter better.

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57almost 7 years ago

I liked the mind control aspect of the story and the sex was hot but I wished it had been another page longer and detailed the threesome at home with Mom! That would have been smoking!!

TSreaderTSreaderover 6 years ago
A very good addition!

Very well done! A bit short, but I enjoyed it regardless! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great chapter

Please write more chapters with this family. Very fun story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Forced

to not only not read, but to totally ignore page 2.

verbicideverbicideabout 5 years ago
Ugh.

It's one thing to have a sociopath as a protagonist, but to try to justify his behavior by making the teacher seem like the villain (as if this were possible under the circumstances) is just ridiculous. Well written, but 3 stars for the attempted ethical gymnastics.

blackknight314blackknight314almost 2 years ago

Good job, thanks for sharing your work.

TexMan1970TexMan197018 days ago

I am enjoying this story very much! Kelly Winters has a bright future on this website! 5 stars

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