All Comments on 'When Paul Met Jane'

Not too many stories have that aspect on here, and I'm glad to know that a lot of other people other than me like having my ass played with and slapped.

Well done! I liked the way the story evolved. I would love to experience life as Jane. Hope to read more from you!

Situation was realistic. Obviously Jay wanted to be caught and let Jane our. Very hot. Can't wait to learn more about where Paul is coming from. I love muscular guys who are bi curious.

xoxo

Di

You need to edit a lot better. The numerous grammatical errors were distracting.