All Comments on 'When Red is Golden'

by techsan

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Brought Back Loving Memories and Tears

Losing my wife of 32 yrs to cancer 20 months ago, I read your story and was reminded of how much we loved each other. We also met in college and were faithful to each other. Keep writting for I enjoyed your story and style and it really moved me to write you and give you these comments. Take care of each other and kiss one another like it will be the last each day. God bless Bob

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Touching story.

I've alway had a thing for redheads since watching The Angry Man.

You told this was great sensitivity and a timeless beauty.

Good stuff!

Regards, Jack

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Sweet Reality

How I loved the intimacy, the slow build, the inner feeling of joy for these young people as they discovered and relished each other in such a tender old-fasioned way...more, please?

scriptordelectoscriptordelectoover 17 years ago
Beautiful!

This was a sweet and touching tale. Thank you for sharing it!

DesertPirateDesertPirateover 17 years ago
Very well done!

techsan,

Wonderful story,great build up, the characters are believable, just really well told. Thanks!

DirtyAliceBlackDirtyAliceBlackover 17 years ago
Amazing!!!

That was one of the most beautifull stories I have ever read and if it is true well - there's even more to aplaud. as I said amazing.

ALicexxx

jkwheeljkwheelover 17 years ago
great story

this story brings back memories for me.

my wife and i met in college and we did many of the ame things,walks and tours of the department stores icecream and handholding.We were virgins and together we explores all the great and wonderful things that giving the whole of ones being to another means.we had 33 years and 3 children to show for it.she died last year and i am lost without her. your story came at a low point in my life,i cried for what we had and what we ca no longer share.

but life goes on and so must i.

thank you for this story.

ken wheeler

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
erotic and clean

i never understand people --- especially women --- who no compunction about sucking and swallowing saliva and seminal fluids from complete strangers. MULTIPLE strangers, that is.

i mean, for the girly husband to want their wives to fuck total strangers, so they could masturbate to, that's different, because the guys get to enjoy the exhibition without putting their flesh/bodies in any danger from germs and viruses --- some of which can be scarring while others deadly,,,

many of your typical "dumb blonde" types are happy that they are able to fuck many men, especially in front of their wimpy husbands,,, but don't they know they are putting themselves in danger? I'm not talking about fiction here; I'm talking about reality and this happens in reality, yes.

Anyway, this story is about EROTICISM and CLEANLINESS (swapping bodily fluids with only the one you're married to is not only safer but they are willing to take care of you if or when you are sick, even from a major sickness/diseas; but strangers who simply leave deposits? That's gross)

SweetWitchSweetWitchover 17 years ago
So Sweet.

Simply a beautiful and uplifting story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
i understand!!

How true.for64 years my wife and I have been together. 59 married.Stories like this one is sometimes true.Thank You!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
nice tale

I liked your tale. It was very much like my life story. A pair of virgins true to

each other for the past forty six years for us.. she is my one and only.

I am her one and only.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
SIMPLY ONE OF THE BEST

...coming of age stories -- especially for one so short. It left me holding back tears.

Spawned some loving comments as guys recognized similarity to their own story. Which makes me think it is more realistic than the tales of teens doing everything within the first few (or the first!) dates -- holding hands, kissing, manual, oral, missionary, doggie, anal, and more. That kind may be OK for a Literotica fantasy, but this story is closer to the-way-things-are in the world I envision. Definitely fits the category label.

So well written, my reading was never interrupted by language issues.

Easily 5 stars.

Paul in Oklahoma

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Very sweet! A really nice story of innocence!

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