All Comments on 'When Spidey Met Batgirl'

To tell you the truth, this is not a very good porn story. It is, however, a very good superhero story. Realistic characterizations and believable fight scenes are quite rare; you should be proud of your story. Take out the actual sex and submit it to a superhero website.

I have to agree with the other commenter on one point: this is an exceptionally well written story. However, I think it still works as an erotica, albeit a less explicit story than many. Keep up the good work.

As I said before.. awesome story and even better continuation.

More of a fanfic than what I am uses to on this site. I hope you write another one, the horny nerd girl in me would love it ;)

I can usually pick apart the hero stories. You built the story well, while keeping it acceptable to us comic book geeks. A+ on the writing.

Very clever of the little black duck!

Great as a comic story, and also good as erotica. It left open a lot of potential there with Marvel Girl, Felicia, and Harley. It would be great if you did more.

Absolutely the best story I've ever read. Thanks so much!!!

I loved it. I hope you write more where this came from.

Erotic and sexy. A work of genius and well written.

I was wet through out the whole story.

Yes, I can't believe I found one these 'celeb/superhero' stories I didn't laugh through out, except at all the right places. It took its self seriously enough to make an exciting, captivating, and sweet story.

They way in which it jumps from point of view through several characters gives it the feel of a comic book, and it pushes the boundaries of these stories, with cursing, sex, and cross universe blending. Amazingly it has a hint of authenticity from its source material, in other words the characters stay faithful to their personalities as we know them.

And the cherry on top is the slow and highly believable build towards it's climax, plus the swirl of past/future story lore and sprinkling of minor fan favorite characters, make it that much sweeter.

Recently found and read both of your stories. Very well done! I particularly appreciated how you blended the universes. If you have more stories to tell, I'm eager to read them.

You created a universe that blends both DC and Marvel characters in an absolutely flawless mix. Peter and Babs' dialogue was so true to their "voices" that I could effortlessly picture the action playing out in comic panels (albeit in a very adult version of the comics!).

Excelsior!

One day, I sat down in a Borders bookstore (remember those?) and read Batgirl: Year One and fell in love with Barbara Gordon. I've been a Spider-Man fan since I realized comics were a thing, and it occurred to me that Barbara Gordon checks off all of Peter Parker's boxes. She's kind of Gwen, MJ, and the Black Cat all in one -- if daughter of a cop, redhead, and wears a cool crimefighting suit is all you think of Babs -- and then I imagined a universe where they could meet. I made some mistakes with this one. I was really trying to The one complaint saw that sticks with me was on 4chan and it was about the dog-fucking thing. And they were right. I got it wrong. Robbie Robertson would never let J. Jonah Jameson publish a story like that. And to answer a question, yes, I have sold a comic book story to one of the big two.