All Comments on 'When the Levee Breaks'

Great little story even without the sex. That being said the sex was fucking great!

Took me back to my youth. Love the way the storm framed the action. Good stuff Stacked!

Most stories don't spend enough time on character development. You did so on this one Thanks for a good read.

Good storm, fine sexy threesome, good sad overview of folks lives in context. Only complaint, i never learned to tell the two girls apart. I think it was Darcy Jack grew up near and was tall, & little dark haired Roxy just can up to his cock for the bj, and up to his neck for the nibbling. Steinbeck?

You must be a professional, can't see an amateur writing with that control and articulation. One of the best ones here.

I did really like this story. The circumstances and action believable... It reminded me that I used to be part of those types of neighborhoods back in New Mexico.

I do wish I had a threesome like that one though... good sex.

Really good story. Really showed the people involved and their lives and issues.

Also reminded me of my high school Best Friend. Sheila. We were awkward misfits too. Poor kids. This one reached me.