All Comments on 'When Wishes Come True'

That was an incredible and inspiring story. You made me laugh and cry while I was able to just enjoy all of your story. The characters were real, the descriptions accurate and it went from what I thought was going to be a cute “man wishes to be woman” story to a wonderful tale about multiple lives and the choices they make while they grow up. I really did love everything in this story.

Thank you for giving a deeply enjoyable night reading your work.

J.D.

A beautiful story, kept me enthralled til the end :-) Kie

Wow! Just wow! Thank you so much for such a wonderful story

Bar none, the best story I’ve ever read on Literotica. Just damned fine writing. Well done!

This story is amazing

This story had everything, congrats on such a wonderful story

Terrific story, very very goid. Five Stars.

This is a fantastic story. I was a little worried at the beginning as I couldn't keep up with a lot of the details for the intro, but it made it all worth it. The more I read it, the more I couldn't put it down. It had a great blend of story telling and erotica. Thank you so much for sharing it.

Couldn't put this story down.

Plain and simple, a very nice sweet story.

OMG I love this story. Up to the point that now a bit down becouse it ended. Keep up the good work :)

Love this story as I do all of yours that I read. I have been trying to write a story for quite a while I have an idea and outline in my head. You have inspired me to try and actually finish it. Thank you so much and keep writing. 🙂

Ran and Jamey!! Hurrah! You are a wonderful storyteller.

Very much liked the running elements: )

Oh my God! I'm screaming and crying! This is so beautiful! Their clothes found the floor, and their souls found each other?!? WHAT?!? I came here for some sexy time romance, and found a resonance in my soul. Now I need to go find a pendant on a beach! Thank you so much!

What a beautiful story.

Thank you for sharing it with us.

Well, i savored this one, taking my time to read it, rather than going whole hog and not stopping and am glad i did as every time I came back to it it felt even better. I hope this is not going to be the last and that you are writing more to be put on here and if you want someone to ever proof read, well am here for you...Thank You

*sigh* I just love magic. ❤️

At first I was like, "Why did she switch it up like that? Is it going to switch back?" But then the subtle hints, and "Rog, Coach Dreamy" comes along. By then, I saw what you were doing and the story ended as I expected. Wonderful work. You really are a very super talented writer. Thank you.

Wow, such a beautiful story of finding true love .. I was so involved and touched by Jamey's life that you had me in tears a dozen times .. you touched something deep in my soul, much like Jamey was .. thank you .. 🤗 😘

A superb story told superbly. I totally enjoyed it after a little confusion in the beginning. More of your stories are on my horizon.

I absolutely love your style. You tell a story of people and personality, love and passion, humour and heartache, and you tell it well. Lost count on how many stories of yours I have read, and am going to keep reading them!

This was the best yet of the stories of yours that I’ve read so far. You handled the transition from male to female which I wasn’t sure how you’d manage it. Brilliant writer!

Thank you for writing this story. It is wonderful and I had a tear in my eye at the end.