All Comments on 'When Worlds Collide Ch. 07'

Awww Aaron & Jen finaly together properly.

And Rafe & Lacey I think there are going to be some fireworks coming :)

Fantastic writing hun keep em coming

Sol (groupie) xxxxxx

Awesome as always, loved this chapter....can't wait for the next one hon.

Donna

thanks for another great chapter - you never cease to amaze me with your writing skills. I could read your stuff for hours. hurry with the next chapter

Kate

Jaz I'm beginning to think that your as evil as Richard Graves!!! Only someone truly evil would end the chapter without getting back on the subject of Rafe and Lacey!! Shame on you oh great evil one!!! Next chapter PLEASE!!!!!!!!

Looking forward to the next chapter.

I tend to agree with spearman1 it is cruel and unnatural punishment to not get back to Rafe and Lacey, to have them finally mate before all hell breaks loose! It was great to see Aaron finally enjoy his Jen, I so love this chapter and can't wait for the next! More very soon pretty please!

Girl... you are amazing! So I was wondering the other week about where you would go next, the battle is probably days away and there are 2 people still needing to be mated... what was going to be your next step.

So impressed with this submission... you always keep us hooked and believing!! Now we just need someone for Cedar :)

The combination of the tender moments of Annie, Rafe and Lacey mixed with the electric and fiery energy of Aaron and Jen… Hell yeah! I thought Demetri and Mara were electric. I am floored! I loved the passion in this chapter and the intensity of Aaron and Jen! Your writing keeps getting better and better, Jaz!

Really looking forward to what you write next….Hurry please!

Go girl!! Well done, floored me with the changes of pace. I was maybe expecting something with Rafe and Lacey, but then you go and have Aaron and Jen heat up the screen. The writing was brilliant :)

Awaiting the next chapter...

i'm going to repeat myself, again, you did it again. loved all the emotions going around and i particularly liked that Aaron never lost his sense of humour throughout everything.

really can't wait for 8 to go "live"

Love this story!! Can't wait for Rafe to make his move. Looking forward to Ch 8.

Another outstanding chapter. I really don't know how you do it but please keep it coming. This shit is too hot!

Amazing Chapter! Can't wait for the two couples to really mate. Really nice to see the brother sister bond you showed between rafe and annie in the forest. great chapter.

With all of the planning for the war ahead, it's nice to know there is still time to be with your mate.

I've not had internet access for the last few months, so I've just picked up the story again now. What a great chapter, and because I've been away for so long, I now have loads more to read immediately - I'm a lucky girl :)

*does a silly dance*

~ right.. now back to the story...

...I tend to read these stories clinicly and rarely get excited anymore when I read the sex scene. I am usualy focusing on the technical aspects, but I have to say that from the beginning of Aaron's seduction of Jen I totally got sucked in. Actually fired my libido up. (The wife just might be getting lucky tonight, LOL) Seriously though, this was quite possibly the best erotic scene that you have written, and the best I have read in a very long time.

I love it! I commented earlier on chapter 3 or 4 (HJB), I've only now just decided to become a member. I have to say, I'm slightly - how shall I say this - old fashioned (?), and would love to have a man like Rafe or Aaron to submit to, to be possessed by, to have love me with such intensity and passion. I would love for someone to know so completely that I'm the one he wants, I would do anything for him. Basically, I would totally cook not being in charge. I'm so backwards when it comes to feminism I guess. Ok, wow. I sound pathetic. Bottom line I adore your story and can't wait to read more!!!!!

I agree with seamless harmony. Im right with you on having a man like that. I made a similar comment last chapter. I would do anything for a man like rafe or Aaron or any of them for that matter. But I'm afraid men like that don't exist anymore. As for the chapter I would have so much fun bein in jens position with the teasing merciless stuff I'd have way too much fun. What a sexy Hott chapter.

Wow, Stormraven88 You hit the nail on the head!!

of all the chapters in all your series, 6 and 7 of this series must be the fastest i've ever read...simply because there's too much of the same old same old sex of Rafe/Lacey with nothing new in it, and a lot of dragging out thus making it less exciting and unnatural...even the conversation between Annie/Rafe has to be dragged on as if you have nothing interesting to add, but just dragging it out to make it longer (like the way some tv series does)...and then going into Aaron/Jen and worse, doing the same....it becomes tedious after a while...yes, we are in literotica, and yes, there should be sex in all stories, but please don't let the desire to have quantity (unexciting at times) kills the wonderful perspective you've done in other series. WTWC thus far left me disappointed when the title seemed so promising...i feel somehow it's not you writing it or something was lost somewhere that distracted you attention. I hope you will re-edit those sections if the entire series should ever get publish into a book.....thanks.

Because I swear Aaron gave Jen a single spank when I first read this years ago. I hope I don't find others missing in the other stories, because if Weres and Vampires can't give a playful dominant spank to their women, what is this world coming to?