All Comments on 'When Worlds Collide Ch. 12'

O....M....G...... absolutely amazing. keep it coming. i check ur site daily 4 new posts and u never disappoint.

EEeeee!!! Im so excited!

Alexei and Cedar, Andrei and Loretta!

I did think Andrei and Emily for a sec but the twins both having wolves for mates seems right! As usual you are amazing! Great story and i cant wait for the next one!

As always another amazing chapter. I'm thrilled that the twins found their mates in wolves, a fitting little twist for their prejudice LOL. Again such a build up of tension, can't wait until Demetri and Rafe get a hold of Greaves - he is so toast!! More soon please!!

Another wonderful chapter. Now time to finish Graves off... hopefully they slaughter him so bad that they'll be picking up bits instead of a whole legs and arms to burn. And once they burn him and the fire simmers down to cinders and ashes they should gather all the ashes and lite those on fire as well ... just in case. And I am finding it quite amusing that Andrei and Alexei have both found their mates to be Millie's betas..serves them right.

I think this chapter was truely amazing. Not alot of fighting but the twist with the twins finding mates in the were's is just to funny. I like that a twin told the wolves a secret on a vamps weakness. Btw I like Emily too.

Scurvy

Jaz!!Jazzarootie!!!!!!!Jazzinski!!!!!!!! Who loves yah baby!!?? I do that's who!!!! Yes Im sing the song!!! GROUPIE LOVE GROUPIE LOVE GROUPIE LOVE!!!!!!!!! Im also thinking about dropping the lawsuit but we'll see!!!!!!! OMG!!! The set up for another story starring our favorite double mint twins was silky smooth girlie!!!!! Im vibing you girl Im vibing you!!!!!! NEXT!!!!!

As always I am looking forward to the next installment!

Both twins finding their mates in wolves?? Jaz you twisted chick! I love it! Lol. . I was so caught up in their story I almost missed the glory in my self proclaimed husband evil side lol. . Alexi and Cedar are going to be very interesting! Can't wait. Fantastic job chicka.

OK, you have redeemed yourself. Now I only slightly want to maim you instead of kill. Great chapter as always, I love all the new twist and turns. You are now by far one of my favorite authors. Keep up the great work, I can hardly wait for your next instalment.

Way to go, Jaz. Can't wait to see what they do with Graves (keelhauling, perhaps?) and you know you'll have to give us Alexei's and Andrei's stories. ;)

You have accomplished it! One moment I am angry because Graves doesn't keep his word (we all knew he wouldn't but....), then in tears because Annie knowing she can't win against the stronger vamp risks her life anyway to save her family. Then the anticipation sets in... the wait for the next chapter... will Alexei make it to the evacuation site in time? OMG.... gasped when Alexei tells Cedar how to kill his own kind and then laughed when Cedar started toying with him! Big Bad Alexei falling for a wolf... and I love that she can see through him... Oh yeah on a side note would love to read their story one day! Then shock set in when it became obvious that Andrei had also found his mate in Loretta even though he seems to be a bit daft to the whole idea! Smiled when he couldn't figure out why he couldn't do the mercy kill and then I was in awe when he healed her, again giving away yet another secret. These boys have some explaining to do! Wonderful Chapter! Way to calm down the rush before the epic battle!

When you introduced the twins I knew you were planning some interesting combinations, so when Alexei left to save the evacuated pack, I was sure you'd pair him up with Cedar. However, I did not see the Andrei-Loretta couple happening. It will be interesting to see how they manage the whole "my bite will kill you" issue :)

This so awesome a second update so quick thank u its like Christmas but as always I want more presence. Mechmas

Ah bless, the brothers grim melting like chocolate on a summer's day!

Please continue to develop this fantastic tale x x

Marry me!!! You are masterfully talented and I'm hooked on your work... I'm hanging on your every word... I love Andrei and I will love to see how his relationship with Cedar progresses... Great job once again... Keep it coming!!!

I absolutely loved chapter 11, but chapter 12... amazing x a 100!

Andrei and Alexei were probably the last ones I would have ever suspected for falling in love with weres. Vampire - Were matings, thats a whole new world and I can't wait to see what it brings!

This has by far got to be the best story on literotica and I will be sitting on pins and needles waiting to see what happens next

Another fabulous chapter. I thought the last one was great and this one was even better. You change POV quickly and smoothly. Very well done. But there were times when it was not clear who was who. No big deal, but I will send you an example by email.

Looks like you have developed quite the fan base. I'm really glad everyone is enjoying your work as much as I am. Once again, you have out done yourself. I swear this story just gets better and better. I really like that there is a sort of unwritten code of honor among the vampires. It makes them seem less like total bastards. Appearantly "when worlds collide" they also start to intermingle with one another. Nice twist with the twins, so many directions you can go with their stories. You are pulling everything together into a cohesive story. The fiction of the world you have created makes sense, and hell it even sounds like something you want to be part of. Awesome!

you know my comment by now,(or you should ;-) )

those twins, line them up with the rest of "our" men, they're pure evil wickedness delightful. i can't wait to read the rest, but i will.

their mates are wolves, oh boy, those two are going to be in for a ride.

Just when I think you can not surprise me or surpass your previous wonderful writing, you amaze me even more. And I do not agree with one of the other comments that at times it was hard to tell who was who at points. I knew exactly who was who at every point. Your writing style is wonderful and the plot twists are supreme. I am wishing this one will never end - simply just go on writing it and focusing on different charcters as you go - lol. I have fallen in love with most of the characters and will hate to see it end.

Kate

I feel so spoilt having you post so many absolutely amazing,addictive, wonderful chapters so soon after each other, don't stop now! When will you enthrall us with another brilliant chapter! Love the banter between the twins and their mates! Demetri was absolutely awesome as usual,I am on tender hooks waiting for the next chapter to arrive! Thankyou so much Jaz for posting so fast!

Willie

This is awesome!! Well done Jaz - I thought it would be a quick battle, one chapter max but DAMN GURL!!!

I love the twins twist - very very cool and I definitely didn't see it lol. I will patiently (yeah right) wait the next installment and promise not to harass you at all.

Sincerely - your ULTIMATE FAN (the other fan names where taken I see)

This story just keeps getting better!

Your scenes are absolutely amazing. They draw me in completely. Your work is seriously some of the very best I have read on this site.

I wasn't sure if you could make me like Andrei and Alexei. I shouldn't have doubted. And the perfect ladies for each of them. I'm interested to see how their relationships work out. The boys are going to try to resist and it will be very fun watching them take the big fall.

Now it's time for the big fight. Hope rafe doesn't get too badly hurt!

Cannot wait for morrrrrrreeeeeeee!

...but I couldn't resist adding my own redundant comment. :P Great chapter, and can't wait to see what you do with the twins and their bitches later on. Really well done. J.

You knew you outdid yourself last chapter. Had alot to live up to in 12. You did it again! I loved it. I had said one of the twins might be good with Cedar. You picked perfectly. I really like the two of them. Then Andrei and Loretta are a good match too! I love that he tried to kill her a few times and couldn't and then healed her. That was so great. These two are debased in so many ways, but then this other side is there. I love how you point out that it is Rhianna that first started affecting them. She has always had this effect on people. I like that you didn't have Loretta's wolf immediately ID Andrei as her mate. I'd like to see it be a bit of a surprise to her while Cedar immediately saw Alexei as hers. I can't wait to see their stories. You always make it seemless and let it flow well like having Aben 'toy' with them and that made Alexei get their on time. I can't believe Alexei told them how to kill the vamps. I hope he doesn't get in trouble for it. Good cliffhanger leaving us to wait for the next to see what happens to Graves. Great going. Keep it up!!!

The twins found mates *giggles* to Were's no less!!, OMG Jaz hon, you've outdone yourself in this chapter, i like totallllllly loveeeeeeeeee that....And yes now i am over my dislike for them and can't wait to see where this leads, but now about Nors *wiggles eyebrows* He should have one as well...lol i can't wait to read the next chapter hon, keep up the excellent work.

Donna

Jaz you are the best...please keep them coming we all wait for more...thanks for sharing yourself with us..a faithful fan

I GUESS I WAITED TO LONG TO USE MY IDEA, BUT I LOVE WHERE THIS IS GOING AND IT IS DEFINALTLY BETTER THAN MINE WOULD HAVE BEEN, I SEE A FIGHT BETWEEN CALEB AND HIS VAMPS AND THE COUNCIL WITH THE WERES RESCUEING CALEB , HOPE TO SEE MORE SOON

You have me hanging onto the edge of my seat. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

This was such a fun chapter to read. Thanks for such creative story lines.

Got a mate for Nors how about Alexei placing Emily with Nors since she is looking for a new sire since hers was killed! I am sure Alexei could arrange it! LOL Just a thought!

You killed this chapter . well done.Can't wait or the next one. Fantastic work.

Fantastic Chapter Jaz have really been looking forward to it and I wasn't disappointed. And the twins yeahhhhh and about time Loretta got some good stuff too :)

Great Stuff hun keep em coming :)

This is the first series in the Non Human genre I have enjoyed. I find myself counting the days until the next chapter. Your writing talent is far beyond your years.

First read WWC Chapter 11, and then I got hooked to your series.

I stayed up till 3AM reading WWC, then 2AM the following day when I realized FTI existed.(not my fault I discovered your stories at like 10PM, haha)

Hope chapter 13 comes out soon!

Wondering, does Rafe know how to defeat the vamps since he wasn't in wolf form?? Hope he figures out, or demetri/caleb/someone fills him in, or that he already knows(doubtful, as he would have told the pack I'm sure) I just hope he doesn't die

Just hoping no one major dies(I wouldn't mind if Graves and his cronies die, of course; I doubt he's going to go the remorse route at any rate)

Personally, I don't see Caleb getting in trouble with the Council? O.o Maybe, but not really, ,haha. Maybe someone will though, who knows?

Loved the vamp/were mate twist xDD

*About all your stories so far--I could care less about grammar/spelling. I don't even notice if there are any! I'm too engrossed in the stories to care xD*

I get to read such brilliant writing for free. Thank you. I am really loving this story.

I really pictured the twins getting mated to loretta and cedar only the opposite way round lol. Andrei shit scared me tho and i thought he was doing to be the least crazier of the two. AMAZING and by far i think the best of ur stories as it has a lotta characters finding there soulmates!

Absolutely great story so far, can't wait for the next chapter.

... Those are going to be a couple of interesting relationships, I'm very much looking forward to seeing how you handle it.

Cannd, I agree I like that Loretta didn't immediately recognise her mate, if someone is so far gone that they want to die, mating would likely be the last thing on their mind.

Were knowing about the healing powers of vamp blood is one thing, but imagine a human getting ahold of that knowledge! Vamps would never be able to rest again, hunted, breed in captivity, forever being stuck in a hospital while being fed to injured humans.

With regard to burning Grave's remains, just chop down the surrounding trees (will be needed for building more homes soon if nothing else), add accelerant/napalm and incinerate the fine gooey paste.

Avidly looking forward to the next chapter,

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-ShadowedDreams

P.S. How is Rhianna's book-shop coming along?

I loved going down the shore for the 4th but damn, I had to be tortured knowing 13 was out and I couldn't read it! I decided to re-read this and enjoyed it just as much as the first time. On to 13!

I think someone below had a great idea of Nors and Emily! Can't wait for more! I really enjoyed the bantering between potential mates and others in this chapter. The humor was a nice break from the stressful events!

How can you not love these Vamps. Even at their most fierce they show a side of kindness we've never seen before. I have hope for the bloodsuckers.

I totaly didn't expect the twins finding mates among the pack. It was doubly powerfull considering their initial dislike of the wolves. FTI was good, TA was better, and now your are taking it to a whole new level of exceptionalism.

Thank you so much JazCullen for such a wonderful chapter... love your alternate persona #74

Thankyou so much JazCullen for such. A wonderful chapter...

Love your alternate persona #5

yup! Reading this supersedes everything! No words......that i could come up with could grace the magnitude of this story. good/bad, friend/foe... getting down to the basics of survival... just wonderful all the way through. cant wait to get to the end

Though I'm still curious as to what Andrei's secret is, I'm so happy with the direction this is taking right now. I keep pausing in my speed-reading (because I'm in such a rush to find out what happens next) to think to myself "this story is so. damn. good."

I stand corrected. This will surely be the last time I comment on a chapter of yours (however after this I don't think I will be able to contain myself). I don't know how you managed to drag the fight out but I am bristling with anticipation. You are remarkable in your storytelling. Never stop. I beg you.

Lol lovin what i have read so far of the saga jaz, BUT am i the only one who is twisted enough to thing the idea of Demetri, Calab and Andrei dropping there humanity as sooo fkin sexi? love how the twins have found "Dogs" as mates as well what a fab turn of events

I will be honest. I groaned each time I guessed what you were doing with the twins. It's crazy enough that it could happen. I'm not sure how I feel about it yet...I guess as long as the pairs are happy that's all that matters. On to the next chapter!

If I have to stay up all night reading it will be worth it!!! PLEASE PUBLISH THIS ENTIRE SERIES AS WELL AS THE OTHER INSTALLMENTS!!! I WOULD BUY IT DEFINITELY! :D

...I find it odd that in all the fights weres have seen to have with vamps that they wouldn't know the best way to fight them but oh well a tiny flaw in a great story

I've read this and the other series in order a couple of times and through it all Demetri is my all-time FAVORITE character!!! Excellent stories Jaz!!!

this is my fifty-eleventh time reading this and now my family thinks I'm a lil bit crazy cuz I'm screaming "F*** 'em up!" at the computer screen! LOL, back to the story!

Get then fuuckk them up. I am so amped to read what happens next. Go get em

This is the second time I've commented in this series. I love it. But...

I loved the fact that Cedar found her mate in a vampire...but now Lorr, too?

I really think that is a bit too much It would have been great if there was ONE vampire/were mating..but now there's two. Just like there's two vampire/human mating (Annie/Caleb Dem/Mara), three human/weres (Aaron/Jen Rafe/Lacey Millie/Jared) Now there's to be two were/vamps.

It really becomes quite predictable with how each character is going to react to their mate, if you know what I mean? It was quite a let down that both weres have found their mate in a vampire.

Oh well, still a great story, though.

It kinda makes sense that if one twin was to find his mate in a were that the other would as well, just a thought.

This is where Loretta and Andrei and Cedar and Alexei meet! It's also where it becomes inevitable that Mara will be changed! I love to come back and read these incredible stories that are so important to linking with the future ones!

I literally squealed when the twins fell in love. There is a certain amount of repetition in the story between the sex scenes and the matings, but I've been more than willing to give the whole series 5s thus far. Great job JazCullen.

Also, just a personal agony. Why oh why did you choose the surname Cullen for the leading vampire male. I understand writer's choice and your username obviously shows you have an affiliation to the name for one reason or another, but I cringe at every reading of "Cullen". Regardless, thank you for your time and imagination. I can't wait to see where else this will go.

- onyx

I am so thrilling on all the new vampire/werewolf pairings. Great to see a sort of healing of the rift between the two species.

Wanting to have his cake and eat it. Apart from dumbass Rafe moments I love this whole series to bits. You are truly an amazing writer. I'm always torn between leaving a comment and moving on to the next chapter. Kudos to you Jaz. And ditto on all the other positive comments. Ps: Demitri is such a hottie!! Whew, it's gettin hot in here..

SM

I can just eat Caleb up. He is sooo yummy. And romantic. And sexy. Shit and a fictional character :(

So glad you're finally back on speed in this chapter in this series after the earlier 7,8 boringness.... JazCullen! Thanks! NHU

My hearts racing as though I'm there right with them. Have to mention Alexei and Andrei, who would have thought that two hard, vicious twin vampires could be felled by two she wolves. They are in so much trouble. ;) It's going to be so funny following them as they get to know their mates. :)

But, first there is Graves still to be dealt with. Looking forward to reading chapter 13. :)

Seriously only you could have a deadly war raging and vampires finding their werewolf mates at the same time! I love it!

Just thinking as I re-read this whole series how much I'd love to be the filling in a Caleb and Demetri sandwich. 😍 I can't really make up my mind between the two, but I lean a bit towards Demetri. I have a fondness for his badass side and humor. He's that extra bit more dominant with Mara than Caleb is with Annie, and I love it. Plus the description of Mara matches me, brown hair and eyes, so it helps me dream. I really love when the vamps go feral, turning all vampire and ready to hunt. We don't see that in the more recent installments of the saga and I really miss the tension and excitement they bring. To me the ancients will always be the biggest baddest boys on the block.