All Comments on 'When You're Not Looking'

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wild memberwild memberover 19 years ago
The bonding of soulmates

How healthy relationships would be if inhibitions could so carefully be nurtured and turned into positive, powerful bonding behaviour between lovers. Sex manners placing the partner's needs before ones own creating emotional and physical safety at the core of loving - these are so well expressed in, "When you're not looking."

Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Your writing skills

I like how your stories lead up to sex.Not your typical warm bam porn star bs.Well written good lead u and great foreplay. Tku

Campus77Campus775 months ago

The complete story. Told us about the characters...found a mutual connection...created a plan of action...Followed through and finished with a flair. Definitely my kind of story.

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