All Comments on 'When You're Young'

it was nice and sweet love story. i would like to see more of there life, ups and down, there comming out .and after school years.

I think this is a sweet story. As a straight person with many gay friends I have always wondered what their first times were like and how they got over those awkward moments.

I would like to have seen a little more character development. You drew me into both boys and My curiosity was not sated on who they were. Also, there were some pretty glaring typos. A trick I try, when I don't have an editor, is to read it out loud to myself. It always amazes me to catch those mistakes in a piece that I would have sworn was all done. I think your transition from one boy to the other was a little abrupt.

It's a good thing when the reader wants more, wants to know more.. and after reading this story.. I DO.....

i really liked the story. i could feel the purity of the emotion behind the characters but would have enjoyed it more if you would have written more. nice work though, need to work on the grammer a wee bit. keep up the good work.

cute :)

I felt young again while reading this. Romantic and very hot at the same time. Thanks for writing this.

Yes very nice.