All Comments on 'Where Dreams and Reality Collide'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Amazing!

This story is wonderful! Not a lot of build up which I usually prefer that I almost quit reading, but man am I glad that I didn't! It was so long and well detailed that it more than made up for it. I also like it when I get to get to know the characters. And you didn't have to waste any time with a lot of back stories to have the reader genuinely care for this couple. Keep up the good work and thanks!!!

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Just a man trying to turn a hobby into something more. I appreciate feedback and hope you're able to find something that you enjoy in my words.