All Comments on 'Where Dust Glows'

It's probably too late to change the title of this tale, but please make next one "Where Dust Glows - Ch 02." (Two digits in case it goes over 9 chapters) I'm not aware whether Lit can handle two identical Titles by the same author, but I would doubt it. Additionally, having the same Alpha characters and Progressing numeric characters keeps the episodes in order.

Good tale so far :) I like / prefer characters to be short in number, having more than half a dozen confuses, and with something like an English Language Name. Daoud is close enough to David for those of us who move our lips whilst reading.

Cheers, and Thanks for so far,

Kilroy

You've created an interesting post apocalyptic world and I look forward to your next chapter. I'd like to offer this suggestion: we have met a lot of new characters, so it would be helpful to let us get to know them better before introducing more new characters. Good start!

Yves

Good Start!

interested to see where this goes

what could grow the mutants. TK U MLJ LV NV

thank you all for the feedback so far :). It's great encouragement. A couple of comments:

- i did screw up the chapterization. My bad, will make sure to proceed with Ch 02, etc.

- one person made a comment about too many characters. I completely get where you're coming from, but you will have to let me throw a couple more into the mix over the course of the story, but once that happens it should settle down.

work is underway on chapter 2, but with exams and work hitting me particularly hard, it has been coming slower than i'd like, but with the holidays coming soon, maybe i'll curl up at a good pub and hammer out a couple more chapters for you guys.

Hope to read the next chapter soon. I can see a lot of directions this could go in... it will be interesting to see if any of my conjectures are correct.

This is very interesting! I would love to hear more!

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