All Comments on 'Where Fire and Ice Mix Ch. 02'

a good chapter. i'm very much enjoying your story. it's different and fun. you would be helped quite a bit by an editor. the warning at the beginning helped reduce my irritation at those items, but it was still a bit distracting and there were a few areas where it was a bit confusing or the flow was just a bit off. i hope to see the next chapter soon. :)

I regretfully have to inform all fans that I lost all my stories that I have been working on and their previos chapters due to some glitch or something wiping all the data from my computer and I didn't have them backed up elsewhere. So I'm afrade I can't continue this series or the others I have. I'm sorry.

I do have a new story that I'm working on and have been while I made shure The whatever caused this shoudn't happen again that I started the old fashioned way w/ pencal and paper and I should submit it in a few days.

Love it! I await in anxious anticipation.