All Comments on 'Where the Lines Overlap Ch. 07'

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I_am_MidnightI_am_Midnightalmost 8 years ago
😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

Ohhhhh wow....I'm feeling so mushy right now...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Niiiiiiice

I am liking Taron more and more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
ahhhhhhhh!!!!

*****. Love it. Next chapter please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
For all the good it does you

You're in love and being forcibly separated.

musicfreakmusicfreakalmost 8 years agoAuthor
Author's note

That ending was kinda mushy wasn't it? Haha. Contemplated that while writing but then I was like, what the hell let's do it.

More drama coming in the next few and final chapters. New chapter on 6/2/16.

baikalisanbaikalisanalmost 8 years ago
5 ⭐️

With just the right amount of mush!

I want the chapters to come faster, and yet I know the faster they come the faster it's over.

Lord knows I hope u come up with more spin off stories!

Be safe 💚

canndcanndalmost 8 years ago

First, thanks for answering questions. I have to read the first story that I missed. Thanks for taking the time to respond to us.

This chapter really showed how sweet Taron is. I think of the two, he believes in them making it more. The care he took to help kev work through his issues was sweet. He clearly cares for kev deeply.

It would seem helpless to a degree to think they will not be able to live together bc of their jobs. A relationship based on visits when they're free would say too big a challenge if permanent to most. I am hoping there is a way around this for them. 6 GT

musicfreakmusicfreakalmost 8 years agoAuthor
@cannd

I always make it a point to answer readers' questions and concerns. I think it's my obligation and responsibility as the author. If not me, then who, am I right? Haha. Besides, you guys take the time to read my story, and it's the least I could do to answer any doubts that you may have. And to be honest, I do like answering you guys' questions. Haha

sm1982sm1982almost 8 years ago
They click so well!

I love how these two opposites connect, their chemistry is great which makes intimate moments that much sweeter! I didn't mind the mushy ending, some of the love stories on here don't work out or frustratingly, are not completed so I'll take any ending but this one was sweet (:

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