by KR
This is as good and vivid as Ch.01 and that was extremly good! KR seems to be able to write and excite, in any of the genres!
Great work again!
This is one hot, hot story that made me feel like I was right in the middle of the sex play. You deffinately have a talent for laying it down on paper (so to speak). I'm going to look for other stories by you. This one left me so very whet.
LoveLindy
its been so long since i read quality erotica here i'd almost given up on this site... bravo, you've produced a fabulous story! i just read ch1 too - fabulously hot, i love the character development, & the sex scenes are AMAZING! i'll definitely be back for more ;)
This was deliciously fantastic. I hope you write more stories like this one. Then again I'm not sure my heart can stand the strain!!
KR ought to be writing professionally. The writing style, flow, and evocative word-choice is first rate.
KR, Bravo, Your writing is deliciously erotic and sexually exciting. Please keep on doing what your doing. My bi-g/f and I can't wait for more of your stories. You are now on our favorite list! Ken & Pat