Great story. Intense, romantic erotica. I found the last line funny because I know couples who have taken a mutual sexual partner on their honeymoon with them. Hurray for polyamory!
Like to talk to both men and women about erotic writing. I am always looking for people to help me edit my work and welcome input about spelling, punctuation, syntax and the general readability of my stories. Right now, (June 2013) I am doing research for the stories I write ...