All Comments on 'While Guests Were Talking'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Erotic anthropology

I'm impressed. You've sown into your very erotic, craftfully written story some very neat anthropological observations that I am not sure every reader here will fully appreciate. Definitely an outstanding story!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Pls continue your story

Loved your story, and it has a lot of potential to develop into a whole story. Discovering intimacy between old friends, while the hosts seek to reclaim their long-lost joy of sex. The next morning opens all sorts of doors (figuratively or literally)... Please continue!

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