All Comments on 'While I Slept Ch. 01'

ok i feel like that should have been in erotic couplings and your next chapter may be more non consent/reluctance. however that was really confusing (was all horny teen romance then BAM she had an off feeling?) to read & cant rate yet coz need to see if next bit flows . will wait to read more

Just my opinion: Think this one needs to not go the way of nonconsent as it feels like an after thought for you. Loved it as it is and could see it develop but in the interracial section

I really want a second part on this story! Please continue. :)

I don't think so, this wa not non-consent

Just a vague guess on my part, but I think she experienced an "off feeling" because of the therapy problem she has. Perhaps she had therapy before and the therapist did something to her?

More like leading into mind control than non consent. Also seems to be somewhat stilted.

You ARE gonna write another part right?

Just because your character gets blue balled doesn’t mean you have to leave us hanging as well. 🥺

Lmao rude of you!!! Why'd you have to leave us hanging like that? I love your story!

To beginning writers. Please finish your stories before you post the first chapter. We know you had an idea of how the story ends and we want to read it, no matter how depraved or deviant you feel it is. We all have our own deviant kinks, that we don't share with anyone, except when we write.