All Comments on 'While She Was Drunk'

nice story of taking advantage of the passed out wife of your friend. Since you got a taste of her I'm sure you'll be planning on getting her drunk again and going further. looking forward to that story!

Thanks for the hot story. Seeing a strange pussy and playing with it is always very erotic for me whether I am reading about it or experiencing it.

I just love passed out pussy.It is the best.

oh man i would have fucked her if i were u... more please

It would have been much more erotic if you had shot your cum into her belly.

There are a number of distracting errors in this story. I had to stop reading this because of them. If you do go back and edit this, pay attention to your verbs. That's where you seem to run into trouble.

Really need to check spelling and grammar

Almost every sentence starts with a form of ing verb... annoying indeed.

Pain in the ass to read; poor English, lack of punctuation, spelling errors, and NOTHING rolled smoothly.

Take up MUSIC.