All Comments on 'While Staying with Aunt Sarah Ch. 03'

I really hope these first three chapters are just the beginning of a series. Well written, a good story line and VERY erotic! More please!

A great story - all three parts! Well planned, well written, and very erotic!

BB Bill

Please continue the story line. Also liked the "Aside comments."

Otazel,

This was a well written and well thought out story line. However, you should really think long term about this series and continue to write about staying with "Aunt Sarah". You have a lot of material left to work with as you have yet to explore the relationship between Ruth and Cloe. Of course there is the one character you seem to have left out... Aunt Sarah

When are Ruth and Chloe going to get a go,it's not fair to leave them out.