All Comments on 'While Steven's Asleep'

Best birthday gift ever!

I know I've read this one before. Any reason why you've reposted? Didn't even change your name, just added a 2 on the end.

Either way, it's a fun little story.

A nice 'twist' at the end and, yes, even if we saw it coming, it still works.

My original account got screwed up somehow, so I'm slowly migrating stories from that account to this one. I added an explanatory preface to each of the stories, but somehow it disappeared from this one.

I'm really having a lot of "somehow" issues here lately, huh?

Glad you liked the story, though, and I hope you voted (again).